Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?
Prompt Response : After revising my paragraph, I added a sentence about how I’ve felt unsafe as an isolated woman to better connect to the theme of isolation. I also replaced one of my quotes with a stronger one that shows how isolation affected Cheryl Strayed more clearly. Summary : I added a short personal detail about feeling unsafe when isolated and changed one of my quotes to a stronger one that better shows how isolation impacted Cheryl Strayed and supports my point. Reflection : These changes helped make my argument clearer and stronger.